Impressions
1. Wired Puppy, a weird name for a coffee shop
2. Organic coffee and tea
3. Small but neat setting, efficient
4. Pasteries looking delicious
5. Friendly manager and staff
6. Lots of posters, ads, and products on sale.
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Just by the name, you wouldn't be able to tell that Wired Puppy is actually a coffee shop. The name seems more suited for a hip electronic shop, maybe a thrift store, anything else but a coffee shop. Its logo is of a cartoonish barking blue dog, jumping with a cup of coffee in its front paw, possible because of too much caffeine. Intrigued, I brushed past the patio furniture and decended the few steps into the cafe.
The interior is bright and homely. The place is small, but neat and efficient. Its bare brick walls sets the place apart from most other brightly colored restaurants and coffee shops.
I like this sentence, a cartoonish barking blue dog, jumping with a cup of coffee in its front paw, possible because of too much caffeine. Very creative Ashilk.
ReplyDeleteMaybe try to write a longer sentences, I guess it may help you write better and sounds smoother.
Overall is great!!!! Cheer up.
Its logo is of a cartoonish barking blue dog, jumping with a cup of coffee in its front paw, possible because of too much caffeine.
ReplyDelete(It is so funny.I like this vivid discribtion~~~)
Lots of posters, ads, and products on sale.
SWAG (t-shirt, muggs, etc).
( ----I just study from internet.kkk~~~~ More discribtion is better i think.
Also the organic banner hang on the wall.)
Its bare brick walls sets the place apart from most other brightly colored restaurants and coffee shops.
True!
I'll be there with my friends !!!
ReplyDeleteIt seems like great place.
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ReplyDelete"The interior is bright and homely. The place is small, but neat and efficient." This is my favorite sentence. Very simple but the pace is very brightly.
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